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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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You've done really well with the technical aspects of this, I really like the contrast of the organic forms of our characters in the mid-ground of the image versus all of the geometric objects around them. I really love how there's a foreground, middle ground and background as well..... that sign in the foreground and the level of detail you put into it really just grabs my attention for some reason. I feel like there's a tad too much white/pink tones here, though it overpowers the otherwise really nice color scheme for me. You could also add more cracks from that fissure in the asphalt, for something that destructive it's not doing much to the area around it.
As always it's well drawn, and the contrast between texture, color, and form in this picture is really, really nice. Your personal characters...are just so interesting, and very well designed. You have good story telling devices, I could see you illustrating a children's book about them or making a graphic novel of sorts.
The city silhouette in the background kind of ties the image together for me, but it feels too strong in color. As things get farther and farther away, their color's fade because of the increasing layers of air (and stuff in it) come between them. Maybe making it a toned down blue? Experiment around with different hues.
Hope this helped, and I love your work! Some of the most unique on this site. I can't wait to see where art school and instruction takes you, Gracie.
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